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2. compare contrast essay second draft

                                                                   29.03.2014
OUTLINE:
Thesis statement:
 There is a fine line between the leader and boss that we can compare these two notions from different angles.
BODY PARAGRAPHY 1:
TOPIC: entering for the leadership.
1.0: pioneer, innovation, variation are related to the leadership.
2.0: the leader as an entrepreneur.
2.1: duty accompanied by the leader.
3.0: a new and helpful field in leadership.
4.0: activating a job by doing a right work.
5.0: “we” as a prior concept.
6.0: persuading the followers by showing pros and cons.
7.0: being respectful and helpful.
8.0: the leader as an innovator.
9.0: working for success and instilling it into followers.
BODY PARAGRAPHY 2:
TOPIC: entering for the boss.
1.0: authority, propulsion and rules are related to the boss.
2.0: the boss as the one giving orders.
3.0: managing own area and aiming at directly doing tasks.
4.0: “I” as a prior concept.
5.0: commanding without regarding pros and cons.
6.0: not being innovator.
7.0: remaining inside authority.
8.0: waiting for success from workers.
CONCLUSION PARAGRAPHY:
1: SUMMARIZING
2: (ADVİCE) My advice is that people should forget about the ego and they should regard other’s opinion. So, many complex situations can be solved easily in short time. I mean that try to be a leader not a boss.
                         The Leader and the Boss
    Contrary to the popular belief widely known, the leader and the boss are quite different two notions of each other that they are used wrongly and interchangeably. However, there is a fine line between them that we can compare these two notions from different angles. So we can correct a misassumption that being known by people.
     Firstly, we may consider the concept of leader. We  must think about the concepts of pioneer, innovation and  variation when we mention about the leadership. We  can expand these notions with examples. The leader is an entrepreneur for his followers. If there is a duty, which has to be done, it is accompanied by the leadership of the leader. The leader transports his followers to a new and helpful field instead of managing an area where he is. The leader activates any  job by doing a right work. “We” is a prior concept of the leader. He persuades his  followers by showing the advantages of work to be done instead of giving orders blindly. He is respectful towards people and he advises people to be helpful. He is the one who generates innovations using at his mind. He works like an ant because he knows that success does not come by chance and he instill this method into his followers.
     Secondly, we may consider the concept of a boss. We must think about the concepts of authority, propulsion and rule when we mention about the management. The boss is the one who gives orders for any duty instead of being an entrepreneur for this duty. He manages an area where he is and he aims to do the tasks which are given from the top authorities directly. Unlike the leader, the boss uses the concept of “I” frequently. He commands his personnel to do any work without taking into account the disadvantages of work. Rather than take a different or new steps for any duty, he remains within the framework of rules. He does not use at his mind outside of authority. He waits for the arrival of success from his personnel.

     To sum up, the leader and boss are two notions that are separated by a fine line from each other. While the leader leads for followers, the boss commands only. The leader searches for the right, the boss does not search anything apart from authority, whereas. The leader takes basic in the notion of “we” whereas the boss takes basic in the notion of “I”. The leader says “let us go” while the boss says “go”. My advice is that people should forget about the ego and they should regard other’s opinion. So, many complex situations can be solved easily in short time. I mean that try to be a leader not a boss.

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